I think it's a pretty great rough mix, with a few small areas to fix. The lead vocal cuts the mix pretty well. You could probably open up a little more space if you toss an EQ on your instrumental/beat sum, and dip it around 2k. Some of the doubles and ad libs (i.e. the down pitched vocals) are for the most part, lost in the mix. Maybe tweak with the leveling and or eq. Also, the mix as a whole is pretty dark. I would brighten up that synth going on in the back, get it sparkle a little more. The track as a whole is nice, i like the kid spittin on it. he reminds me of a blend of talib kwali and this dude j stalin from the bay. keep it up and keep grinding!