overall I like the clean sound you've put together hear man, sounds like a nice upbeat track. I like the guitars at 0.42 and the rhythm guitar at 1.49. There's a synth bass sound that comes in at 2.06 which to me sounds too loud in the mix, also the snare gets a lot quieter at 0.42 which for me doesn't work that well.
Good track, I think it's nearly there, just needs a little more fine tuning for my tastes, keep up the good work.
