This is off to a strong start: Drums themselves are good but the pattern feels off with the main sample you used. It's like the drums are too busy, I'd go with a simpler pattern like kick, snare, kick-kick, snare.
but that sample was fire. And the track ends a bit too abruptly so it's hard to critique the arrangement but I think that with that sample some legato strings during the chorus would be great.
Nice sounds/sample used and the lofi drums sound great my only issue is the drum pattern sounds off it doesn't really flow nicely but thats about it the beat was really short wasn't that much to give feedback on.