strange intro, the chord progression is not very traditional, leaves it a bit awkward but I guess thats the feel youre goin for. I like the melodies and chords in the actual verses though, sounds like it could be a strange Christmas story, like filled with some f%&%ed up stuff haha.. could be a creative rap track. drums hit way too quiet the melody overpowers them. maybe throw in some sidechain compression from the kick to the melody. good stuff keep it up