JewieThomsen
New member
Hey all, i wrote a new song, would like some feedback.
i still press you're letters to my lips,
and feel your skin against my fingertips,
you caught me in a cage,
and the key is lost in rage,
and it seems it'll never stop
the storys end is a blank page,
and i just wish for these wounds to mend,
but you hurt me in the end,
and i believed that our love was blind,
but you opened up my mind,
yet i still can't see,
why we could never be,
cause i would've gotten on one knee,
just to make sure it was you and me.
but you made me the enemy,
said i was caught by insanity,
but you're a necessity,
without you, i cannot Iive,
if I'm alone, i have nothing to give,
but the bonds turned stiff,
no space where to bend,
you had no more letters to send,
our love had come to an end
this is too much to contend,
i guess i should have known your love was lent.
all i ever wanted was your kiss,
your smell, your love's bliss,
now i can't see no light,
it seems love really is blind,
but we lost the fight,
only darkness in my sight.
spit your hate on my soul,
it seems my death is your final goal,
i gave you nothing to hate,
yet it seems you cherish this fate.
Thanks in advance.
i still press you're letters to my lips,
and feel your skin against my fingertips,
you caught me in a cage,
and the key is lost in rage,
and it seems it'll never stop
the storys end is a blank page,
and i just wish for these wounds to mend,
but you hurt me in the end,
and i believed that our love was blind,
but you opened up my mind,
yet i still can't see,
why we could never be,
cause i would've gotten on one knee,
just to make sure it was you and me.
but you made me the enemy,
said i was caught by insanity,
but you're a necessity,
without you, i cannot Iive,
if I'm alone, i have nothing to give,
but the bonds turned stiff,
no space where to bend,
you had no more letters to send,
our love had come to an end
this is too much to contend,
i guess i should have known your love was lent.
all i ever wanted was your kiss,
your smell, your love's bliss,
now i can't see no light,
it seems love really is blind,
but we lost the fight,
only darkness in my sight.
spit your hate on my soul,
it seems my death is your final goal,
i gave you nothing to hate,
yet it seems you cherish this fate.
Thanks in advance.