This is very good i like your melody . Thought it was gonna trap out but it took a good turn. Try flipping that beat a few different ways. I know u didnt ask for composing tips so the quality is good im not really big on mixing and mastering so i wouldnt be able to give u tips on your drums that somebody wouldnt come behind me a disprove. Just keep working you make good melodies
I know a lot of people on here say the spund quality is important but it doesnt matter if you have the best mastering in the world with a wack ass melody. It actually probably could work how the rap game is now but just keep working on your composing you are a hell of a composer when people want to purchase your beats, then master them or tell them to pay for it.
Yo! The sound quality is great all of the layers were crisp and concisely where they should be. Whatever formula you used, worked.
The composing was very nice, quite literally had a very "kind" feeling to it.
Your mix is fine, and it's a fairly clean sounding track. I think the drums could definitely use some changing up as far as the actual samples go, it sounds like you're using a techno/trance kick on a rap beat which is kind of off putting. Is this sampled at all? If not you have my respect.
- Cool piano melody
- I think your melodies/composition was good -- i think you could've benefitted from choosing better sounds/instruments (that'll come with time so dont worry) because the sounds you have right now are kind of cheesy (in my opinion atleast)
- Drum work is solid -- i like the pattern
- But like with the instruments, choosing high quality drum sounds can help elevate the beat alot more
- I like the mix on the drums tho -- they knock!
This is 100% midi, original from scratch. I have many drumkits. It's just that I wanted to recreate that techno/video game/90s/rugrat type of a feel. That is why I am using FM and pop piano, and ice crystals lol....
hey man I think this has really good potential, I would agree with the previous feeback that it sounds a bit video-gamish. I think its the synth. also think it might be a little harsh, I would suggest bringing the drums down a little bit. I do think the chime is dope tho
I don't why this reminds me of Sega Genesis game at the beginning lol.
Anyway, here's my honest feedback. The track itself isn't really my style but I can appreciate it. I do like the transistion around the 1:30 mark. I DON'T like the drum samples. The snare reminds me of one of those old Casio keyboard snares. I don't have an issue with the drum patterns or cadences, just the actual samples on some of your percussion.
To start, I would cut out some of the hight end frequency of the piano. The mix seems really good through my laptop (don't have my monitors with me). I could definitely see this in a platforming video game or something. Some cool synth sounds in here.