[Rap Song] Know It All- 100% Feed Returned

Lyrics are dope and the beat is raw!!! I believe you have something unique there. But other than the quality of the vocals the one major problem I see which is essential to music in every genre, is the emotion that you are creating for the listener. There was no emotion in any of the words you were spitting. In a track like that I want to be captivated. If you Listen to EMINEM and see how he takes you on that emotional roller coaster throughout his songs. That is what I believe you need to do and if you can portray emotion's that you are talking about in the song...then it would be a banger....DEDICATION+MOTIVATION+SACRIFICE=SUCCESS :victory:
 
WieczKid said:
Lyrics are dope and the beat is raw!!! I believe you have something unique there. But other than the quality of the vocals the one major problem I see which is essential to music in every genre, is the emotion that you are creating for the listener. There was no emotion in any of the words you were spitting. In a track like that I want to be captivated. If you Listen to EMINEM and see how he takes you on that emotional roller coaster throughout his songs. That is what I believe you need to do and if you can portray emotion's that you are talking about in the song...then it would be a banger....DEDICATION+MOTIVATION+SACRIFICE=SUCCESS :victory:
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Now thats some quality feedback haha I see what you're saying cuz I practiced spitting it and actually putting meaning behind it in my voice and my friend said it sounded a lot better than before. Thanks for the feed man






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timetravtoaster said:
Greetings.



I really like the beat. It has a nice laid back vibe and a nice rhythm. I really like this and the sample use. Nice job on this.



Please return the feedback: https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/space-toast-vol-3-teaser-%7C-%2Aaugust-17th%2A-%7C-f4f-451971/


- TTT
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Thanks for the feed, and ur style sound reminds me of flying lotus

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The beat was cool, you could've brought more energy with the flow , it would've sounded better, as of the mix, i think it still needs work, try recording in a real studio if you're serious about this Music.
 
Sal_Meth said:
The beat was cool, you could've brought more energy with the flow , it would've sounded better, as of the mix, i think it still needs work, try recording in a real studio if you're serious about this Music.
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Thanks, im gonna learn how to mix

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SwagProductionz said:
if you mixed and mastered the track.. you coulda had something.. dudes voice on teh first verse was ill.. But anyway come check out my house release and trap beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...asy-trap-beat*-feed-4-feed-drop-links-450135/ .. i've produced for soulja boy and honey cocaine among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/cocaineaudio
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Thanks for the feed

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lynxmafia said:
Not bad. Dont give up though. Keep recording music and always thrive for the better.
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Good advice
 
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