If you have a lot to rap about...

[Droozehdeh]

I have a nice empty song that gives you plenty of room to say what you need to say. Check it out at https://soundcloud.com/drooz/send-me-on-a-trip. all feedback appreciated and I will try to give feedback to everyone who wants it.

 

[P-TeCH]

feels more like a soundtrack to me than a beat. has a nice atmospheric touch too, something kinda dreamy and wide open.

you used an interesting combination of instruments and synths. I personally try to keep my sounds in the same category more or less, I think that real crash you used after the reversed one sounds off in this type of track. everything else is kinda electric and synthetic so I would've tried to lose the "realness" of that crash to fit it in better. goes for other cymbals you used during the track as well.

that moving baseline you bring it at 0:48 is cool, it really helps to keep the track going

overall mix and quality is ok, could partly use some fine tuning but its allright so far.

hope my feedback helps, keep at it!

 

[Droozehdeh]

i get you man thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it. how do you think some trap crashes would fit in?

 

[wildinout8]

Intro is a little slow for me with just that synth and some kicks and snares. This would be real hot if it had some additional instrumentations playing a melody. I like when that wobble bass comes in.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...back/new-les-fleurs-sample-f4f-always-474020/

 

[Droozehdeh]

i was trying to leave space for a rapper. thats why i didn't fill it out. i figured it would be a great backing to a lyrically driven song, but i guess i left it too empty then?

 

[Yungspazz]

The is pretty chill and deep. I see what you did there. If you had a few more melodies i think you'd have a big hit for somebody. Dope Work!

Feedback? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...lner-x-start-over-*feedback-feedback*-478518/