I feel like it's just missing a tiny piece to make it really pop but I'm not sure what it is. I think it's fire though with your permission I'd like to write to it, would give all credit and won't make any money off it I just do it for fun. Are you using one drum pattern thru out each verse? Just a slight variation there too and that's industry level. Sorry if it sounded rude I think it's a great track regardless I'm just a perfectionist haha
Feedback: Prefer you check tracks 1 & 3 first, any other tracks you need feedback on let me know.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...these-youngsters-call-dubstep-attachd-498497/