At :48, I feel like there's either a key change that doesn't transition well.
At 1:15, music change. Need a more subtle progression into the dub elements used. It's a complete and abrupt change.
I love how it blends back into the original melody though. Just work on composition of the progression into the first change.
Think the drums sound pretty hollow. They're right there in the center of the mix but aren't cutting through. They also sound static. I think this is the area that needs the most work. Too much reverb on the kick. Too little on the snares. No hi hats to fill out the groove.
Great start, especially with the non-dub sections.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...se-dance/eye-storm-progressive-trance-514281/
