Twisted Fantasy F4F

[Olie]

Had this drum track on the back burner for a while, just finished adding melody. (needs properly mixing).

 

[YWM]

this def gives out an eerie vibe. i like the scratches you put on the track. is this meant to be a hip hop beat? if it is i think there is too much goin on for an emcee to hop on it. otherwise its a real creative track man

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ack/new-flatbush-zombie-type-beat-f4f-473728/

 

[mmc7]

there's too much going on... i dig the scratches. try remove some elements, and try to keep it simple.
overall nice concept.

 

[cc1992]

not that good. sounds like noise. giving my a panic attack...fo real

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-give-receive-feedback/how-feels-good-473797/

 

[Olie]

not that good. sounds like noise. giving my a panic attack...fo real

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-give-receive-feedback/how-feels-good-473797/

That comment made me laugh hard. Stop with the weed bro. For real if you want feedback you need to give me something to improve on. Thanks for everyone elses comments i will try to simplify the beat a bit and make it cleaner and easier to take in.

Cheers.

 

[MascaraSeBeatmaker]

I really like this one! Yea, its pretty weird, pretty hysterical, kinda dark. I know what you wanna express with that and I feel it. I dont think that theres too much in it, its just right. Good work.

 

[Nipharu]

Really eerie I like the vibe behind sounds, not sure if its meant to be a beat sounds more like a stand alone instrumental.

 

[Quez]

i somehow like this. but something is missing there. can't quite figure out what. i think it could sound a bit more organic.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-receive-feedback/chillwave-type-beat-473830/

 

[Olie]

i somehow like this. but something is missing there. can't quite figure out what. i think it could sound a bit more organic.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-receive-feedback/chillwave-type-beat-473830/

I figured out it needs a sample on it. I'm trying to get a insane laugh like the joker does but need to find one that's free use commercially.

 

[Redux]

Definitely an eerie track, but there's nothing that compelling about it. Like other people said, at points you need to simplify and maybe add more melodic elements.

Mixing is really good though, even if it's not something I'd ever revisit . Keep up the good work.

 

[Olie]

Simplified version with a bit of mixing:

 

[Crooked sound]

This beat knocks! Sounds simple, but i know it isn't haha. Easy to rap over. The mix could have been better (as you said). But all together pretty dope beat. Good job!

 

[McLovin Beatz]

Aww man this is Danny Brown all day! He would mash this.

You can check for me right here or just hit play on the sig and drop a comment.

 

[slim...]

damn, thats some scary shit... not a big fan of this horrocore style, the beat feels claustrophobic, maybe u were goin for that, but im not a big fan... the drum rolls are nice tho... just need better spot in the mix to be brighter...

keep it up mane and sorry, but im really not a fan of the style, but its nice executed...


i finished my "Call Me" beat u gave ur feedback, in case u wanna se the finished track, heres the link https://www.futureproducers.com/for...mix-[feedback-pleaseee-]-473881/#post49779742

PEACE!

 

[yjvasco]

really like this track man, sounds work well with each other...but i do feel like a sample would be killer on here...i really like how u have the baseline really low...sounds really good overall, really unique keep at it...maybe work a bit on mixing...

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...el-me-p-sign-feat-yj-vasco-renaci-f4f-473545/

thanks

 

[Olie]

This is probably the last version i will post up on here before i start mixing properly and writing vocals for it.

Last chance to give feedback and help guide my final product to somewhere awesome!

 

[Outss]

pretty gd reminds me of a linkin park styled production.. it's different keep it up (btw if u do vocals, i think u should make them a distorted styled mix)

 

[Olie]

Interesting comparison to Linkin Park. Thanks for the tip on vocals, that's a good idea.

 

[G-Town Beats]

This beat has a scary feeling.
Really different from all the other stuff.
I like those scratches.
Mix sounds good to me. The kick could be a bit mor knockin.
Anyway nice stuff!

 

[plotwist90]

It's a decent horrorcore track. The arrangement is dope, but I feel like all the sounds are a bit cheap. Invest in some good drum sounds, sites like The Drum Broker and Goldbaby are a bit pricey but worth it in my opinion. Keep up the good work, not much more I can say on this one.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...lines-indie-sampled-beat-474019/#post49780388 check my beat out if you got time.