Hey.. I know there's only so much you can do without a band, but I reckon you should get pretty close with the sounds you can get on the PC.
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The inauthenticity seems to stem from the guitar sound.. So I was wondering if somebody could give me advice on how to make this little clip here that i've made, sound more like the style of
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UN1fQxKveZ0
Thanks
Your problem is a combination of a lot of things:
Bad drum sounds
Bad drum programming ("machine gun" effect when you play multiple snares/drums in succession, unnatural wooden sounding programming)
Bad sounds overall
Performance does not sound "human"
Poor mix
The song you linked to is raw sounding... the players are good... their performance is emotional... their performance is energetic...
If you are only going to use sounds on your computer (i.e., programmed drums, synth bass/guitar) you need to use good sounds... you need a variety of nuance sounds for the guitar (and the bass, but more so for the guitar)...
you should not over quantize...
You should really listen to the music you are trying to emulate... listen to the instrumentation, There is more going on in the track you referenced than in your track. Listen to the performance... hear how human, loose and raw it is...
the guys in the song you referenced are actual "players"... you need to be a "player" to play music effectively... this does not mean you cant achieve this with a sequencer and a computer only.... but you still have to "play" the music. That is what this style is.