Rate my lyrics, please. (I'm a beginner, and this is my first time writing lyrics)

bintangjtobing

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Verse I
Please don't ever let me go
I couldn't bear a doubt
My head is in the clouds
And I'm not your type
So please, forgive me if I turn the truth into lies

Verse II
We are forever young
And we're gettin' old
You don't wanna be here
'Cause I'm too damn young to know what's going on

So baby, get me out of my way
Say it loud, say it loud
I'm so sorry for making you cry
(Oh, oh)
It's hard to let you go
When there's no one else around
You don't wanna be here

(Oh, oh)
(Oh, oh)

So baby, get me out of my way
Say it loud, say it loud
I'm so sorry for making you cry
(Oh, oh)
It's hard to let you go
When there's no one else around
You don't wanna be here

Actually, I need a bridge to make more emotion to the refrain, can you kindly help me to make more lyrics or make it better? Will very much appreciate your kindness in writing your username/name when I publish it to the public.
 
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