Please give me some feedback on these song lyrics

Oksingdamn

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I just came up with this


They aren't very good i don't think but please give me some feedback

Crazy Kinda Sociologist

You get on with life as a Sociologist,
You're a crazy kinda person.
You like netflix on Sundays,
You like Singing in the week.
You like to contemplate with me
But when you start to daydream,
Your mind turns straight to Her.

Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,
I notice the way you think about Her with a smile,
Curved lips you just can't disguise.
But you think it's her making your life worthwhile.
Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?
Her or...
Me

You like to use words like 'Number One,'
You like to use words like 'best.'
You like to use words about me.
But when you stop your talking,
Your mind turns straight to her.

Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,
I notice the way you think about her with a smile,
Curved lips you just can't disguise.
But you think it's her making your life worthwhile.
Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?
her or...
me?

You like to hang out with Peter,
You like to kick back with Matt,
But when left alone,
Your mind turns straight to her.

Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,
I notice the way you think about her with a smile,
Curved lips you just can't disguise.
But you think it's her making your life worthwhile.
Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?
her or...
me?

You're not too fond of Betrayal,
You really hate brussel sprouts,
But you just think back to Loyal,
And you're happy once again.
 
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