-u asked for it buddy.
-"Standing"
Some of the notes in the bassline sound flat, up against the other tones in the song (in beginning), before the song starts moving.
Sounds like
a lot of other trance tracks (indistinguishable). Overall, really good song structure, and if I hadn't heard a lot of trance, I would think this is an excellent song. I can't think of any improvements you could make to this. Powerful chord cycles / tones. Not too many of those stupid @ss drummrolls that mofos be usin every friggin transition.
If I were you, I would keep the exact same structure, but go in and fx/filtersweep/change some of the tones so the song doesn't sound like 95.6% of all other trance songs. You should make a dark and evil version of it.
-"say no evil"
bump the bpms up like 10 or 12. . .
arpeggio-I would call this "hard trance", but that is just me. When I think "hard house" I think hoovers and vocal cuts and schit (hoovers = chainsaw sounding sweep)
progression dies right after first arpeggio, then same o', same o' one. . .
-good job overall. You have sequencing, arranging down like a mofo. Just be more experimental and less templatey with the sounds
-popd going back to work