Opinion on some lyrics plz

Gabriel41230

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As i sit on my throne
Knowing I'm not alone
God with me not on my own
Trying since the age of 13 to be grown
Let it be known
Que esta pasando en el pueblo de brush
Todos en un rush
Losing all the trust in people
Once were equal
Whats the sequel
Inequality I got lost in
One day we will win
Never doubt our ability
Its doubt that causes instability
Facing consequences
Mending fences
Losing freinds
When I acted like pretend always was less
My minions deserve the best
Expect nothing less than for me to accept
Reality for what i make it
Made my mistakes no longer can i fake it
Had trust and love but I chose to break it
Addiction had me losing it so dont mistake it
Would rather not cause friction but consequences I be facing
Hate that it goes out tof control
All that hate that penetrates the soul
Created something so jaded in the ways of old
Life can be cold
I'll never fold
Right sight something to behold
 

ben_john7

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It can be seen that you wanted to convey your deep feelings, but to be honest, I could not understand the essence.
 

Gabriel41230

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It can be seen that you wanted to convey your deep feelings, but to be honest, I could not understand the essence.

Essence is written on the pages the lines say what they say
Its perspective that may be lacking or Idk its just me trying to get on track after a long ass battle with addiction and all the judgement i face because of said battle... Most of it could be in my head of course yet I know I'm not alone in this battle
I guess i jjst wanted to convey the perspective in which we live inthe world lime .indset of an addict u know..
 
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