New Trap Beat Feedback please

[TrippBeats]

YouTube - ‪Hard Trap Beat FL Studio 10‬‏

I want to know all opinions and tips so let it out!!! thanks.

 

[timayproductions]

can't really judge the mix cause i'm using laptop speakers right now
but i do like the lead you got going. the hats are cool too.

the chorus (i think) is seems a little too cluttered for me, but thats just my taste... check mine out:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-beat-*higher*-feedback-110%-returned-372036/

 

[iamquea]

I think it would be a dope beat if u had higher quality sounds. Honestly it sounded like u used stock sounds. Work on picking the right sound for your beat. Other than that it was nice. It was composed beautifully.


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[quantumleap]

i like the drums...especially the hi hats....dont really care for the pizzicato whatever sound that is tho...bells sound nice, brass sounds nice...bass is bangin...all around good job

check out my latest work: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...sic-give-receive-feedback/3-new-beats-372135/

 

[TrippBeats]

Thanks for the feedback yall

 

[BostonProducer01]

n ice try. good patterns and im really diggin the hi hat rolls but its just not trapped out enuff for my liking. I would fix that main melody and try a different instrument something more pleasing. Definately could put somebody on there though and get ignant. keep at it... also... the low end of the beat was a little muffled and the 808s and shit didnt TRULY BANG like a trap house wud BANG

 

[TrippBeats]

n ice try. good patterns and im really diggin the hi hat rolls but its just not trapped out enuff for my liking. I would fix that main melody and try a different instrument something more pleasing. Definately could put somebody on there though and get ignant. keep at it... also... the low end of the beat was a little muffled and the 808s and shit didnt TRULY BANG like a trap house wud BANG

Yeah I know.... Im trying to do some trap beats but I really can't get the hang of it... I don't know why

 

[DaSupplier]

Sounds need an upgrade. Would make this track 10x better. Mix could use some work also. Shit is pounding though.

check this out
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/grind-syndicate-%7C-new-%7C-free-dl-%7C-feed-4-feed-372243/

 

[obdrummer]

nice i liked the bells but the lead i think needs a different sound but still sounded good. thanks for the feed

 

[OneSProductions]

Dark style trap, not too shabby. Trap isnt my thing, but im liking this one. Only thing that i can say is that the bass/808 seems to overpower everything and drowns the rest of the sounds out when its there. Kick could be brought up some more as well.
Overall though, nice work.

Return?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eedback/new-kid-block-let-games-begin-372297/

 

[drage21]

i like the hit hats, not a big fan of the start, switches up way too quickly, but liking the sounds used, all good

return feed

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/few-beats-wondering-if-you-guys-could-give-feedback-all-returned-371951/