NEW SONG "Losin My Focus"

[JMFLYproductions]

wow keep it up man you have my following!
SoundClick artist: JMFLY productions - page with MP3 music downloads

 

[posingmusician]

Groovy! Really diggin the feel to this song! Think it would be even more BUMPIN if there were some more layered vocals in the back!

 

[wattabottles]

Thanks a bunch guys !

 

[J Hights]

I'm not sold that you're feeling those lyrics - put a little emotion into your performance. It sounds like you loosened up in the second verse, but it felt a little rigid in the first section - good vocals though. Have some fun when you're recording and it will show! Your track is really cool, fits well with the lyrics.

 

[wattabottles]

thanks ! will definitley look into what u said !

 

[smasuno]

So dope man. Really good work there. I feel like the vocals could be mixed in more and the kick brought down some. Some of the transitional fx are not rly mixed in well too. I feel like this could be a radio hit quality track if you paid a good mixing engineer to mix it for you.

 

[thugsy15]

man, i love this track! very groovy.

check my track out https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/need-comments-my-r-b-beat-someday-feedbacks-returned-course-371728/

 

[logwood]

I appreciate the comments Samsuno - I will keep that in mind next time around...

 

[wattabottles]

thanks a lot guys !

 

[FortNights]

felt like i hopped into a time machine for a second the tracks are really take me back to an old school vibe

feedback appreciated: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eedback/free-july-4th-new-lp-take-2-a-372879/

 

[wattabottles]

thank you ! feedback has been returned