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Benneuh
Member
Hi coopz,
You have certainly a good idea in this track.
However these are some remarks I have:
- the kick is too loud
- the track can certainly benefit from some extra background/foley elements to fill the mix
- in my opinion the main melody goes on for too long in the first section, it becomes too repetitive after a while
- the vocal has too much reverb
Hope this helps!
greets
Ben
PS here's my track if you'd be interested to give some feedback:
You have certainly a good idea in this track.
However these are some remarks I have:
- the kick is too loud
- the track can certainly benefit from some extra background/foley elements to fill the mix
- in my opinion the main melody goes on for too long in the first section, it becomes too repetitive after a while
- the vocal has too much reverb
Hope this helps!
greets
Ben
PS here's my track if you'd be interested to give some feedback:
aPathetic01
New member
I quite like this Coopz. Regarding Benneuh's feedback, I don't mind the kick being loud. I was listening with my reference monitor speakers at a lowish volume though. Maybe if I put my headphones on it'd be different. I agree the initial melody becomes a bit repetitive. Yes, the vocal has a lot of reverb, but I think it suits this style of track. Overall nice track though.