Neo Soul/ R&B Beat [Summer's Breeze] Prod. By "Grand Pappy"

[GraNd Pappy]

I'm not really a producer lol and you can probably tell it. I grew up listening to gospel when I was a child, started listening to R&B more when I was in my teens. I'm eighteen now, and often listen to songs that combine the two genres together to get that smooth neo soul vibe to it. I picked up FL Studio, played around and this was what I ended up with. I wish I could throw some lyrics into it, but I can't sing to save my life lol. I would love it if someone made a song to this, so I can have something new to bounce my head when I'm riding to school. Anyway, enjoy and let me know what you think of the vibes.

 

[BL3]

- Vibe is good
- I think the rhode melody is a little too fast and feels like too much is going on -- maybe just focus on the chords and worry about the accent notes for the hook or something
- Turn up the kick/layer the kick to make it stand out in the mix more
- I felt the beat was repeitive because it was the same instruments playing over and over -- maybe try switching it up/dropping parts out/adding different instrumentation for differnet parts of the song

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...drake-type-beat-all-feedback-returned-449680/

Thanks!