Need some feedback

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Hello hello, I am still a beginner when it comes to producing music but I need some feedback on a remix that I did a while ago. Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated :))
 
Chrisulrich said:
Only Chris. Just listening to it yet again(!) Maybe some gentle synth strings in the background, or a pad doing a similar job (you could experiment with different pads) then, just before the verses start, you could - I dunno the technical phrase for this - fade out the strings, do a brief drum fill (you know, one of those ba-da-ba-da on syndrums bits!) and go back to the piano-thing and synth - like you've got it now - for the verse without the strings, then bring the strings back in for the chorus bit. After the final verse, when you hit the chorus bit (the bit you've done now) for the last time, you could bring in a thin choir (not a Mass Attack of Voices thing but a gentle choral 'AAHHH' sound on the right side, blend in the strings with it on the left side and maybe a few handclaps in the middle so the listener could clap along to it? And repeat it 2 or 3 times with the choir and handclaps to take the listener into the stratosphere?

But keep the whole thing gentle and Barbie-doll cos that's its magic. It's got a beautiful, soaring innocence to it that I absolutely love, which places it far above the contrived similar things I've heard. That's what keeps it in my mind and, I'm sure, will keep it in the minds of all others who hear it.

You've got something with this. I'll shurrup about it now. But don't let it go, will you.

Yours respectfully

Chris.
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Thanks so much for the very informative feedback and your personal thoughts about it. I will definitely try to improve on it and make it sound better and eventually finish the entire song. No, that is not me doing the vocals haha but then again, I will take your opinions into consideration and use them to improve on the song. Thanks again very much for the feedback :)))
 
The song is very cute and bubbly and I love that about it.
I don't know how much of a beginner you are but I've been producing for about 10 years now, and you seem to know things that I've only recently learned about.
With that said, I think the thing that will take your music next level is learning about using multiband compression on your master channel. It will help you to easily make up for a lack of mixing knowledge for now. Obviously I recommend for you to learn to mix better eventually as well, but that'll take years of experience; so (Multiband Compressor on Master) will do for now. :D
quick tip: Try to have sounds in every part of the sound spectrum, from 20hz-50hz to 15khz-20khz

Good luck and keep it up! :)
 
CaramelCamel said:
Hello hello, I am still a beginner when it comes to producing music but I need some feedback on a remix that I did a while ago. Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated :))
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Good song, but it seems to me that the chorus needs to be re-equalizer
 
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