It sounds really nice! I'd say it needs a little something to make the song more intense/emotional towards the middle or end (perhaps some more orchestra-like vibes?) That's only a suggestion- but the sound is very clean and soothing! Good luck with the rest of the song, it's pretty solid!
very sweet ... (been listening to a lotta hard beetz so nice break from that!) ... I think her voice could be a little more prominent in the mix, sorta want more of a crescendo but hey ... it's clouds and rain! sweet sweet rain ...... good job!