7/10
It's a well-made piece but the intro fails to build into a suitably loud and "filled" main melody. You have 3 minutes and the full dynamic range of your computer! I suggest including some more melodies, a wider dynamic range, and a stronger beat to ensure this is something people can dance to.
I suggest adding a drop; a brief pause before the musical elements double can really help your music make people in the club euphoric.
