I like when your original, I can bare when your doing something thats been done. I think you do things with your voice in certain songs that are interesting. I haven't reached out to many people yet but I think we could probably make a pretty decent track together. Your doing a good job the only thing I want as a listener would be a song that hooks you in from begginning to end. The hooks from features on your project lacked impact I think.
on paradox - the hook had a good start that had me on the line deciding if it was good and grabbing or just ok. But I think before it repeats its good enough, just the repeating instead of evolving hurt the track.
on break chill relax - the dude can sing thats for sure but the hook just isnt catchy, again I think minor changes/ additions might fix it but generally on this one it had a good idea just didnt feel well executed.
on FNBT - I "think" I kind of get where the hook was trynna go but it definitely turned out pretty bad. I'm sure that dude can make a ok song but this wasnt a good one for him. I think the way he sings doesnt fit the beat.
All that being said, you have talent I can see that. I personally would like to hear you on a wider range of music, just because I wonder what you could do on some more upbeat positive stuff but I would be willing to work with you.
As a final note, I'm sure you feel some type of way about what I've said but understand I've heard alot of shitty rappers and I don't normally say anything like this for them. I believe if you work hard enough you can achieve what your looking for so for the love of God, please don't feature artist that bring down your musically quality. Especially on more downtempo kind of self intricate darker music If the person singing the hook doesn't make the song 10x better than I'd figure something else out.
much love man,
please check out my stuff on the thread I posted. I cant post links yet. I will post new songs every friday hope to hear you on one of them someday.
