I saw other people posting their lyric, these are the ones I wrote last week

Bn19

New member
I don't have a name for this song yet, what'd you guys think?


[Verse 1]
Gun shots ring in my ear
Beats can’t drown out thi-is melody
Bloodshot eyes, they’re not clear
I can’t feel, but there is no remedy


[pre-Chorus]
I don’t know
And I’m just scared
What will the future bring?
I can’t just sleep and I can’t shout,
But I just know
That I can’t feel


[Chorus]
I feel like
My life is not my own
No, I feel like
It’s time I take control
I feel like
You’ve never really known me
No, I feel like
It’s time I let you go and be free


[Verse 2]
Bleach in my eyes but I still see
Why can’t this shadow please stop haunting me
Strapped to the chair awaiting the guillotine
How can I truly say that this was unforeseen?


[pre-Chorus]
I don’t know
And I’m just scared
What will the future bring?
I can’t just sleep and I can’t shout,
But I just know
And then I sing...


[Chorus]
I feel like
My life is not my own
No, I feel like
It’s time I take control
I feel like
You’ve never really known me
No, I feel like
It’s time I let you go and be free


[post-Chorus]
But I feel like
My life should be my own
No, I feel like
It’s time I took control
I feel like
That I’m the real me
And I feel like
I finally am free
 
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Bn19

New member
idk if you can see it on here but I'll put them in the replies: [FONT=&quot]Burden[/FONT][FONT=&quot][Verse 1][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Gun shots ring in my ear[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Beats can’t drown out thi-is melody[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Bloodshot eyes, they’re not clear[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I can’t feel, but there is no remedy[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][pre-Chorus][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I don’t know[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And I’m just scared[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]What will the future bring?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I can’t just sleep and I can’t shout,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But I just know [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]That I can’t feel[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][Chorus][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]My life is not my own[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]No, I feel like [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It’s time I take control[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]You’ve never really known me[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]No, I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It’s time I let you go and be free[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][Verse 2][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Bleach in my eyes but I still see[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Why can’t this shadow please stop haunting me[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Strapped to the chair awaiting the guillotine[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]How can I truly say that this was unforeseen?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][pre-Chorus][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I don’t know[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And I’m just scared[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]What will the future bring?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I can’t just sleep and I can’t shout,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But I just know [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And then I sing...[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][Chorus][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]My life is not my own[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]No, I feel like [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It’s time I take control[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]You’ve never really known me[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]No, I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It’s time I let you go and be free[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot][post-Chorus][/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]My life should be my own[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]No, I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It’s time I took control[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]That I’m the real me[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And I feel like[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I finally am free[/FONT]
 

Alexander Paul

New member
What genre? Feels like a rock song. As stand alone lyrics it's a bit cliche and repetitive, but I think it could work in the right circumstance with some cool phrasing and a powerful voice.
 
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