Honest feedback

[C-bix]

How could I improve this track and what are your thoughts?

 

[AV_learns_moosik]

I caught a few elements that had some rather hard pans either right or left that seemed a bit too aggressive. At 1:30 you have an element start hard right move hard left. You could probably reduce the panning just a tad in my opinion, may sound a bit more natural.

 

[Bartedecout]

Cool, hot, I like this kind of Deep House, Trance.