[EDM] Recuest - Rise (Original Mix) [Free download]
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SwagProductionz
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i liked the intro with the rising noise sound.. but then it just flattened out and didn't get better till i fastforwarded it to 3:30 .. nice build there. good use of side chain.. i think melody could be better and a better clap could have been used but it does sound professional there.. good job .. But anyway come check out my house track and trap beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rap-beat-feedback-feedback-drop-links-446854/ .. i've produced for soulja boy and honey cocaine among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/cocaineaudio
Adrian-MarQ
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Pretty good beat! I think that you should try to add some subtle things in on the parts in between each transitions so that they don't seem so stationary (Ignore that statement if that was your intent). I liked the part between 3-4 minutes. It made your mix alot more entertaining!
Here's a link to my latest work if you would like to return the feedback! https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/dark-beat-%2Af4f%2A-447270/
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Recuest
Deep Trippy Progressive
Done!
Interesting you say it flattened out, somebody else made a similar comment, could you explain what you mean by that? What would make it "less flat"? xD
Pretty much this, you should probably work a bit on the parts before 3 min mark, because after it, things get a lot more interesting. 3-5.30 sounds really nice, enjoyed that part. Anyway, check out my prog. house remix of Nadia Ali's Crash and Burn: https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../[edm]-nadia-ali-crash-burn-remix-f4f-447278/
Recuest
Deep Trippy Progressive
Thanks, can you give me some examples of what would make the intro better please? What would you add or want to hear? I've been told that something is missing but I just can't figure it out :/
Recuest
Deep Trippy Progressive
)Solid composition mate. Nice melody that wasn't too boring but easy to whistle to. I will say though it otherwise felt pretty run of the mill.
I have my own first track here if you wanna give it a listen I'd like to hear what you think: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...usic-give-receive-feedback/some-house-447574/
I have my own first track here if you wanna give it a listen I'd like to hear what you think: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...usic-give-receive-feedback/some-house-447574/
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your elements are very nice, just work on track layout a bit and you could have some solid productions.
return the feed if you have time https://soundcloud.com/djelytal/nicky-romero-symphonica-elytal
return the feed if you have time https://soundcloud.com/djelytal/nicky-romero-symphonica-elytal
Recuest
Deep Trippy Progressive
Thanks for the nice comment
I really liked the intro in your track, all the synths go well with each other.
The percussions kinda lacked some high end and punch, but maybe that was done deliberately..
There were some strings in the drop that were a bit unharmonic, I think they really fit the track but maybe their melody needs a bit of work
The layout was also very nice!
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I had a song with almost the exact same melody!
Really love the drop, but you could put a white noise sweet to make it sound more exciting, if that's what you want!
haha
can I hear it?Yeah, I know the FX aren't fantastic.. I hate working on them :/ but thanks for the feedback ^_^