DreamLine (Original)

This is a work in progress and centers around a very saturated and detuned synth that plays the melody. It's a progressive track that evolves throughout the runtime hopefully in a way that is interesting to listeners. Let me know what you think and leave a link in the comment so I can check out your music as well, Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/chazmblue%2Fdreamline
 

DaCharlie

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I realy like how you play with the synths and Effects to variate and stay interested. Im not sure about the break at minute 3:30, compare to the length its okay but could be also start a minute earlier to bring it in relation to the 5:30 (but how i wrote im not sure about ;)) overall this one is realy cool.
 

maxdonaldson

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drop at 2 minutes is super sick and the arpeggiator synth sounds great there. I would double check rhythms and quantization from minutes 1 to 2 though, a few things feel awkward. 4 minutes feels great too, mix overall really the best around here imo. nice : ) transition elements really cool to my ears too
 
drop at 2 minutes is super sick and the arpeggiator synth sounds great there. I would double check rhythms and quantization from minutes 1 to 2 though, a few things feel awkward. 4 minutes feels great too, mix overall really the best around here imo. nice : ) transition elements really cool to my ears too
Thanks for the positive input! I really appreciate it and if you have a track you'd want me to listen to just let me know.
 

maxdonaldson

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drop at 2 minutes is super sick and the arpeggiator synth sounds great there. I would double check rhythms and quantization from minutes 1 to 2 though, a few things feel awkward. 4 minutes feels great too, mix overall really the best around here imo. nice : ) transition elements really cool to my ears too
Thanks for the positive input! I really appreciate it and if you have a track you'd want me to listen to just let me know.
no problem! appreciate anything back on this or anything there on my soundcloud. -> https://soundcloud.com/user-941006852%2Fparties
 
drop at 2 minutes is super sick and the arpeggiator synth sounds great there. I would double check rhythms and quantization from minutes 1 to 2 though, a few things feel awkward. 4 minutes feels great too, mix overall really the best around here imo. nice : ) transition elements really cool to my ears too

no problem! appreciate anything back on this or anything there on my soundcloud. -> https://soundcloud.com/user-941006852%2Fparties
I think it's a very interesting track with some really nice synth work. It builds a nice collage of sounds that have interesting interactions with each other. Though I would say that the sudden increase in the track's volume at about 2:30 is a little jarring, maybe add in some risers/buildup effects of some sort to indicate that something is about to happen. What kind of soft synths did you use for the making of this project?
 

maxdonaldson

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great, thanks, really good point about that increase in vol. i'll work that part out! used ableton's sogawni, space arp, snow peak and chord floot aboot
 
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