This is actually really damn good. The melody is amazing. The rhythm for the melody felt kinda off like at around 1 minute, i wasn't feeling the rhythm and melody there.
The best part of the song was probably between 30 seconds and 1 minute. Those hi hats were amazing. The 808's felt kinda weak though, but i guess it would take up too much space.
Keep it up, do more like this i loved the sound design and melody for the most part.