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    It does not suck, I can tell you put a lot of...

    It does not suck, I can tell you put a lot of emotion into your lyrics which is more than many can do, but you might want to start listening to more music in the genre you want to emulate. I can't...
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    Not bad, works more as movie score (i.e....

    Not bad, works more as movie score (i.e. background music to a film) than it does as a standalone track.
  3. It's a bit too sparsely produced in that there's...

    It's a bit too sparsely produced in that there's nothing really grips our attention right away and it doesn't seem to have a beginning middle or end. Generally it's risky to start of a song with...
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    I like the animation very much. Pretty trippy!

    I like the animation very much. Pretty trippy!
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    Very soothing! Maybe some vocals samples though?...

    Very soothing! Maybe some vocals samples though? :D
  6. Notorious BIG - Party and Bullshit Tropical Remix

    I remixed this classic in the style of tropical with some hip-hop elements, let me know what you guys think - any mixing/mastering tips appreciated. Hope you like it! Was lots of fun to make.
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  7. The drums I think should be a bit more hip-hoppy...

    The drums I think should be a bit more hip-hoppy and steady, rather than the really colorful hi hat patterns you're using - the wah wah sound is already jangly so you couple that with the jangly...
  8. I'd add some more dynamics as there is little to...

    I'd add some more dynamics as there is little to no tension in the track, i.e. don't introduce your hi hat so quickly, or it's at risk of being too 90s dance-y. Your risers sound really good though...
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    My only complaint is your kick is just *slightly*...

    My only complaint is your kick is just *slightly* too loud in the mix. Nice works with the vocal chopping and breakdowns, some good tension in there.
  10. Your melody is not bad but I'd suggest you start...

    Your melody is not bad but I'd suggest you start listening to more electronic music in general to get a better idea of what genres sound like, what ideas and trends are popular etc right now. It...
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    Really nice and crispy drum sounds, some melody...

    Really nice and crispy drum sounds, some melody alteration would be more engaging as someone else mentioned, as well as building a little more tension in the mini drops, don't be afraid to milk a...
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    Nice melodies and quite engaging. My one...

    Nice melodies and quite engaging. My one suggestion would be to switch up the bass to held notes at various parts in the song instead of the continuous staccato style as it devolves into...
  13. Your hihat work is quite good, though I'd suggest...

    Your hihat work is quite good, though I'd suggest side-chaining your main melody to the kick much harder or select a crisper and more aggressive kick because it disappears under the main keys, at...
  14. Biggie - tropical house remix - Feedback pls!

    This is my first track I've made using a DAW after many years playing in bands, I'd appreciate any feedback especially regarding mixing and mastering vocal segments and instruments! Thanks !!!
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  15. I don't listen to too much ambient techno but...

    I don't listen to too much ambient techno but it's easy on the ears with the exception of that main hi-hat you selected, it's unfortunately too overpowering throughout the song, I'd either low-cut it...
  16. I DM'd you on soundcloud

    I DM'd you on soundcloud
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    Ultimately songs that are too detailed in their...

    Ultimately songs that are too detailed in their self-pity are no good because they become particular to that person and the general public may not be able to grapple with it or not see themselves as...
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    You could make a gimmick song with an...

    You could make a gimmick song with an accompanying gimmick video like The Chainsmokers did and then translate that into making successful more serious music. Ultimately you should spend some time...
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    Firstly I think the vocal sample you used is...

    Firstly I think the vocal sample you used is really of bad original quality (nothing to do your production) or you may have compressed it or added some effects which are hurting it negatively. If...
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