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  1. Thanks man, definitely cleaning it up more and...

    Thanks man, definitely cleaning it up more and going to re-record the vocals as clear and clean as posisble and add more vocals to outro etc, just literally can't hit those high notes at the end of...
  2. Thanks guys I'm making incredibly slow progress...

    Thanks guys I'm making incredibly slow progress due to life and you know........lilfe,
    but I have about 30 songs on the horizon all of which mean a lot to me

    Also my acid reflux is preventing me...
  3. Feedback on Progressive Rock single "Vanish"

    Hey guys, anyone enjoy this track I'm working on? This is a demo version with rough vocals but I'd be interested in any and all feedback

    Vanish DEMO by Murial | Murial | Free Listening on...
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    -kick drum shouldn't be so far left and...

    -kick drum shouldn't be so far left and epsecfially the snare

    -Bass lacks presence for me personally

    -the intro seems to just start a little oddly like the synth fades in really fast and it...
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    I honestly don't think it helps to be so vague,...

    I honestly don't think it helps to be so vague, for instance, what spots do you think the vocals sound weak and in what way? How can he fix anything if you tell him they "just feel half assed"
    You...
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    Well there's no getting away from one fact, it's...

    Well there's no getting away from one fact, it's way way too repetitive it's essentially the same song for 4 minutes with one slight key change at times.
    Now it's more of a personal thing for me,...
  7. What exactly about the drums do you think are the...

    What exactly about the drums do you think are the issue and how do you think that's effecting the sound he's going for?
    Personally I think the snare might be clashing with the vocals a little at...
  8. Try recording one of the guitars again, but make...

    Try recording one of the guitars again, but make it sound noticeably different than the alternate guitar. Do that in any way you want it's up to you. They sound similar enough that I could imagine...
  9. If that's rain, it doesn't really sound like rain...

    If that's rain, it doesn't really sound like rain it sounds more like noise. I'd recommend a better effect, if it's not meant to be rain I apologize.
    In terms of actual songwriting it kind of is...
  10. Thanks for the detailed reply, totally agree...

    Thanks for the detailed reply, totally agree actually, the guitars do lack a bit of body, I definitely diallled back too much bass and am already in the process of upping this a bit thanks!

    The...
  11. Appreciate the reply I actually really dislike...

    Appreciate the reply
    I actually really dislike MUSE and I'f I'm being honest I don't see where there similarities are that your hearing, no offence.
    Personally I find the guitar tone to be to my...
  12. You can follow me here, BOX | BOX | Free...

    You can follow me here, BOX | BOX | Free Listening on SoundCloud

    I don't have anything up yet but the floodgates will open soon! So many songs in the works. The single "Vanish" will probably be...
  13. I'm so glad you felt something! Seriously....

    I'm so glad you felt something! Seriously. Interesting idea on the reverb. Definitely constantly working on the mix, I'm going to lay down the final vocals soon, there will be more towards the end....
  14. Weird I submitted a reply and it's gone, anyway,...

    Weird I submitted a reply and it's gone, anyway, I'll have to shorten it now, I agree with all those philosophies.
    Anyway for me music is shockingly objective in it's enjoyment, some will connect...
  15. Based on your response though I am definitely...

    Based on your response though I am definitely considering repeating the first verse before the bridge. :)
  16. Sorry man we have different philosophies when it...

    Sorry man we have different philosophies when it comes to writing music, no offence and i'm not trying to imply I don't take advice, your feedback is actually really interesting but I was just asking...
  17. First Single (Vanish) in progress, feedback required

    Hi guys, this will be the first song I've completed fully and I know there's work to be done in terms of production and the vocals are placeholder.
    And there will also be more actual vocal lines...
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