"Smoke & Mirrors" - New single (feedback wanted)

[Preaux]

What up FP?

I go by the name of Prolyphic The Professional (producer/songwriter/artist). Recently, I've released the second single from my second album. The single is called "Smoke & Mirrors" from the album 'The Prophiles'. Just looking for feedback from the FP community to get some opinions on my sound. Any feedback is appreciated. Check the YouTube link below the hear the song and see the makeshift (lol) vid I posted. My full album can be heard/purchased on my website also, www.MusicByPro.com. Peace.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DfQJhrsoLM

 

[soulfulboombap]

good quality on the beat but the mc doesnt fit it ..

if the shoe doesnt fit dont were it..
jus stick too makin beats..

 

[Preaux]

good quality on the beat but the mc doesnt fit it ..

if the shoe doesnt fit dont were it..
jus stick too makin beats..

Thanks for the reply. What type of artist/sound do you think would fit best on this type of track?

 

[ajay2side]

I disagree and think the MC fits fine. Nice song, beat is real smooth. Chorus harmonizes perfect to the melody with an obvious jazz vibe.

 

[Preaux]

I disagree and think the MC fits fine. Nice song, beat is real smooth. Chorus harmonizes perfect to the melody with an obvious jazz vibe.

Thanks for the compliment. I really tried to do something different from what I usually do. I actually did the chorus and verses myself to see if I could pull off the ol' 1-2 punch.

 

[Preaux]

bump

7char

 

[Raybeats]

i feel it, sounds good,

 

[Preaux]

i feel it, sounds good,

Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated.