Start a rhmye offf, here we gooo, first line....

Yo I'm here donating my time
Using my mind
to donate some rythmes
for ya'll to hear
driving in the highway tryin to hit dears
Going to bars and spillin peoples beer
Crazy from far, I'm crazy from near
I'm Nukin Futs in the cranium
I'm insanium
Doing the tango in an aquarium
What did i make u laugh
if not then u can kiss my azz
 
Yo it's time to get serious
I'm so furious
Let me tell you about my life
incase ya curious....


Yo this summer boring *** sh1t
I hated every bit of it
I was at my fathers place
we don't get along
We don't sing the same song
He thinks he's right, I know he's wrong
We don't see eye to eye
Sometimes i would just ask myself why
Why is my dad an arrogant man
He's so phuckin stupid
he got drunk at disneyland
And ended up getting banned
He treats me like sh1t
And i don't even care
He's intimidated by me so he glares
Lifes sumtimes a b1tch, it's unfair
Why is my dad such a stupid being
He has eyes, but he isn't seeing
He sais stupid sh1t to hurt my feelings
Saying sh1t about my mom, like i ain't hearing
Sometimes i stay awake fearing
That his threats might be true
That he might kill me and my mom too
What did we do
we just spoke the truth
I'm not afraid of him or his threats
His threat are empty
hotter then his breath
but one day karma will knock on his doorsteps
Take away his wealth
phuck up his health
after putting my family in threat
he deserves whatever he gets.
NO REGRETS!:mad:


tru story, my dad is a Jack@ss
 
felt it son

liked that kid...i know that it was serious sh.t but the disneyland part made me laugh.

out.:)
 
Feel My Pain.....

Feel the pain of the bastard child.
Who`s father felt he wasn`t worth while.
He broke out when I was still in the womb.
My mother was sentenced to a life of gloom.
She`s another statistic left to fend for herself.
At 7 months premature, I was her only sense of wealth.
I was a sickly child,but full of promise.
Stricken with asthma often chronic.
My moms got her degree and worked two jobs.
As a substitute teacher and a security guard.
I credit her for my intellect and wit.
As for daddy dearest I can`t credit him for ****t.
Grandpa Joseph was my father figure.
Who taught me true manhood how be a real nigga.
How to never run from a fight.
How to swing with my left and block with my right.
He`s 74 years old this very day.
My love for him simple words can`t convey.
I choke back tears as I type this verse.
Let me channel my emotions so they may disperse.
What compells a man to forsake his own seed.
A black baby in a white world has special needs.
Who would teach him his true purpose.
When constantly told by the media"you`re worthless".
Constantly told we were savages and slaves.
"Civilized"by the whiteman in how to behave.
When back in the day they lived in caves.
Exiled by the original man `cause they strayed away.
Who will teach me about the first architects.
The first phillospers who commanded respect.
The black pharoahs, poets, and musicians.
Who enlightned the other nations with their wisdom.
How the mighty Hannibal black as tar.
Was a threat to the Romans from afar.
He gave the Sicilians their darkish hue.
These are historical facts to name a few.
I harbor no ill will toward any other race.
I simply stating the obstacles I faced.
I`m one of many of the forsaken ones.
Feel the pain of a bastard son.
Especial those who at least had a father to hate.
Probably would not have survived one night in my fate.
Those who are fathers,honor your kids.
I have a son, he`s one of the reasons I live.
One:cool:

Hope y`all cats felt that one.....`cause it`s from the heart.
 
smoking! I can't compete, had it too good, but my heart's with y'all.
 
Lifes real funny
And twisted it's weird
see there was this girl i like for a couple a years
but she had a man that she loved best
not knowing that i was pressed
For some strange reason i thought we were meant to b
I had dreams that we were together by the sea
just her and me
feelin the ocean breeze
holding her close to me
and now i think my predictions are coming true
that maybe it's my chance for us two
wait but i'm not ms. cleo
what am i thinkin am i for reol
i don't have a chance with flower
i sit up hours and hours
thinkin of this flower
maybe it's fate, between us two
maybe she doesn't know, and i do
maybe i'm a psycic
or psyco
i just got to wait and see what happens
lettin time flow
 
What can i say????

Science!!!!....you smashed it...straight up & down!!!!...Neema i'm feeling you too...Phew!!!!...some strong words there indeed!!!

gonna come back and lighten the mood with some sh.t talking later...haha

P.s. Mattu!!....lost ya pad of sumthing???...been quiet(just like me:D )

out.
 
wassup yal!!!!


i am back, after some long hard work. anyways fellaz i gozots a gig next tuesday!!!!! bit of fresh hip hop for ya azzez!!!


i be back on da online freestyles soon whes i gots some time.


peace
 
back to talk sh.t!!!!

See my whip/gleams bright in the sun/
don't try to overtake/cause i ain't the one/
metallic black/16vs in the hood/
just me & ma ride and we up to no good/
17ins rims/red caliphers on the discs/
see me in ya rear view/mess about at yer own risk/
double pipe/fully loaded exhaust/
open the hood/see the 154 horse/
clear indicators on the side & the front/
keep inside sharp/ya can't smoke no blunts/
thats how i do/and ya can't eat either/
keep my pad/but i keep my whip cleaner/
Golf GTi keeps low on the street/
lower levels rides always snack on defeat/
german engineering/so i know my whips tight/
starts off the key/hear the growl/then i'm allright/
6 cd changer/nailed down in the trunk/
ain't got the boom box/so i don't hear the thump/
thats ok/i got all that i need/
scared looks on nervous faces/as i make the injection bleed/
low profile tyres/and they're getting kinda worn/
nicks on the rims from the drivers i've torned/
don't get me wrong/my driving style is not wild/
i don't get behind the wheel and turn into a child/
but my whip gets props/as i cruise down the lane/
chicken's heads turn/but they think that i'm vain/
cauze my whip shines brighter than their teeth/
wanna get in my whip to give their corns quick relief/
just a quick flow to show you how i do/
fresh out the box/coming to a theatre near you.

out:)
 
Yo let me tell ya bout my friend
A crazy mutha who got arrested
for masterbaiting
while waiting
for a train
See he was insane
he used to drink koo laid mixed wit paint
and then would faint
on a dirty matress
with an actress
from a porno show
Then leaves her on the floor
runs through the door
calles the cops
and sais she raped him off
so she goes to jail
and he's drinkin ale
and bread thats stale
while throwin up in a pail


sike, i ain't got a friend that dumb

:p
 
Seems quite here now, yall lost your touch ..
or just i aint bin here in a while,lazin at ma couch ..
HaHa, just fo fun,here i go ..
spittin a flow,3am and still going strong ..
Diss me fo this, ya wont last long ..
im like a walkin nightmare ..
ready to bust yo a.ss,thats right flare ..
busting yo wack rhymes,gettin ya back ..
keep dissin coz im bored,waitin fo the nxt wack atack!
born feet first,dont give a fuk ..
poped out,imedeatly hit by a race'in truk ..
s.hit no,i wernt droped at birth ..
but it may hurt,lucifa aint s.hit ..
aint legit sayin that s.hit ..
freestyl'in on paper ..
kill ya h8tr,lyical raper ..
hahaa am fuk'd now ..
so i step down,leave the fuk'in house ..

::: Zzzzzzz :::
 
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no skill thadon
is what u should be called
coming here dissin us all
don't frustrate
when u try to imatate
just shut up and go masterbaite
Or come up with better rythmes
Don't say he ain't got skill
the whole online crew
from flare to mattu
are keepin it true
better then u
i'm not hatin, i'm speakin the truth
the unspoken fact
more serious then an asthma attack
you better watch your back
talkin like dat
dissin a whole crew of mc's who battle like dat
Know where you are, look at a map
don't come here talkin smack
I got respect for all that tell it right
either be positive, or vamoos goodnight
 
Oh Sorry 'MR.Im the best' . . .. fuk'in idiot ..!

now now, little child cant handle it? ..
wats rong? ..momy said u cant suk her tit ..?
u a fuk'in idiot, i was dissing outta bordem. .
ya beta ask those guyz,b 4 u start fuk'in em. .
since when was there a M&F crew ....
u jus a.ss licking now,u make me wanna spew . .
its 5.30am u wanna start bitching ..
shi.t man,think b 4 u start spitting .....
im so fuk'in tired,im dy'in on ma knees. ...
im awake laughin at you,say'in:- ya gotta stop PLEASE!!..
ya can tell ya wack,u lyrically screwing them .....
cant hold the fort on ya own if ya did,u b down in 10 ....
KO'd wit your wack a.ss rhymes . . .
your runnin outta time,b.itch get bak behind the line ..
you trespassing M.UTHAFUKA !!!!!!!!!

::: Zzzzzz :::
:/> not even try'in <\:
 
No don;t get hastey
I know your tired
I bet giving head to your dad makes you tired
don't deny it
your rythmes suck d.ick just like you
rythmes come to me
like witchcraft and voodoo
thadon sounds like somethin just dropped
or fell down the steps, pick one
what kinda name is thadon
sorry no skill thadon, i know you tryin to have fun
but remember u ain't the talented one
your rythmes are see through like cum
There not even deep there shallow
hallow
bitter to swallow
like a pill
my lyrical abilities
have tendencies
to make you want to cry and drink hennessey
don't get pissed at me
go look in the dictionary
if you don't understand what i'm saying
U B!TCH AZZ MUTHA PHUCKA
 
OK kid, ya asked for it!

cut it out now sucka, ya just bore us/
you're like a rodent tryin' ta battle a Tyrannosaurus/
or like David tryin' to conquer Goliath with a blindfold/
hands tied to his nuts and his neck in a chokehold/
no doubt you're like a Civic tryin' to race a McLaren/
the rat in the basement wanna overthrow the baron/
small time Gambini running head first into a wall/
mumbling his wack rhymes, not noticing the pitfall/
thinkin' he's on safe ground when he's knee deep in dung/
too blind to see the ending he thought he could prolong/
would a sane man take on a whole army on his own?/
would he still be kicking when he can see the shafts of his bones?/
torn and battered, next to killed by da click/
kid beware, cuz we on some stone cold sh*t/
16 lines of rhyme smack dab in the middle of ya placenta/
usted sería mudo no entender los significados del contenta

I've been away for a few days, now I'm back and I'm blazin' mad!
 
Abit late

Im a bit late joining this place, but who was that aimed at? As far as i can see,they're as bad as each other,neema and don that is :)
 
well

well don does seem like trouble, but then don does say that he was flaming you because he was bored/tired, so doesnt that mean it is all in good fun?
i would have thought so,but anyhow you shouldnt be flaming anyone, just post for fun, thats is the point of this post right?
 
Precisely. The point of this is to have fun, play with words and try to brag more than the previous poster.

It's a small problem when people start taking stuff personally, it's unfortunate because it breeds some bad blood.
 
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