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    Ancient like knights of the round table, sitting in Armour//
    deadly like what happens to a crane when it drinks//
    from a pool infested with starving piranhas//
    A prick like your boss in a suit acting all pompous//
    If you want truth, I'm the dawg to be honest//
    battling me is like Jay Z trying to battle Nostradamus//
    Jay could never kill NAS so sit back n take a breather//
    cuz ya corny rhymes are putting me to sleep like ether//
    I'm a virus inside optic lenses so swallow and digest this//
    move through your digestive system, stomach to intestines//
    to enter your blood stream in order to reach ya brain//
    just ta send ya ass a message//
    if ya want a quick section or award winning raps, give me ten minutes//
    get to clickty clackin on a keyboard n make a racket//
    then to get shit clappin enter the booth and rap shit//
    and that's exactly how a platinum track happens//
    POOF it's magic// Like a bullet in PROOF it's tragic//
    Click the Sig Pic for TUNES

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    Even niggaz with no hands could feel this...
    The game is my toilet...I Am The Feces...

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    I sit back & make love to the beat, Hip Hops Casa Nova

    Your a witness to what I am on stage, No Jehovah

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    Life is full of choices so choose carefully
    But life is just hopeless so I choose carelessly
    Is it a fact or just an act
    Why talk when you can mock
    U gon light it my way
    Like a microwave

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    im so dope that im dopeee

    oh shittttttt

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    Metaphors is the best way to rhyme. However, there is a lot of cheesy ones I hear from rappers all the time.

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    Google got me lookin up how to rob on "reddit"-Tard
    I'm ****in up banks like a over due Credit Card
    Don't test me you Mellow Faggot,
    because it won't BEE fine when you see whats under my Black on Black "Yellow Jacket"
    ROFL

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    Does anyone have any good methods of coming up with punchlines metaphors and similes I can never think of shit and when I do they sound corny as hell


    money on my mind like a ******* first crush
    funny how time flys that's why I'm always in a rush
    treat these hoes like black jack hit em till they bust
    Whenever she starts to fuss I just dick her
    then get her the **** out of here quicker
    than that dude at the bar that can't hold his liquor

    This was just off the top of my head but see what I mean

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    Don't be so crucial

    Quote Originally Posted by Bud Bunner View Post
    alot of these punchlines are too basic or too complex

    my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots <- too basic

    there are others were peoples trying to do to much within a small amount of bars

    just some feedback
    I've been rapping since i was young. I know what is good and what is shit. The fagot line was good, not amazing, but good. I can come up with dumb similes and metaphors like it's nothing.
    Rap so sweet like cake. ***** im great like frosted flakes. All these crackas wanna be me, make yo ***** wet like a super soaker, 6ix 9ine on FeFe

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