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Thread: Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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    my mission on this earth, vanilla skys and analogies,
    Top me im desert, milky way me out my galaxy,

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    haha killa cam? wtf

    Quote Originally Posted by mc.majik
    killa cam would have written that first line.... and lets try not target battle bars at anyone since thats not the aim of this thread.
    anyway...

    I got the jaggedest blade bro, you faggots can stay low
    breys know i split u down the middle like a jacket potatoe//

    what? ! haha i made all that up like in 10 minutes ! lol
    show me what song MY first line was in so i can hear it...

    and as for the target of this thread ... i started it , so stfu


    punchlines and similes, needles and threads/
    like starring into the sun you squint cuz you cant comprehend/

    but like Arabian quickie mart owner once said , "this isn't a library buddie friend"/ so im closing your book for a early end.
    WREKLeSs

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    commited to a hopital in a dog foam trance/
    from taking happy pills doing the jitterbug dance/


    hhaaaaaa u like that dontcha

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    'what? ! haha i made all that up like in 10 minutes ! lol
    show me what song MY first line was in so i can hear it...

    and as for the target of this thread ... i started it , so stfu'

    that took you ten minutes to write.... lol. the line is not actually used in his songs i was saying its the kinda bullsh1t cam would write, if you want to make a battle thread then make one, the target of this thread was clearly not to battle each other.
    anyway...

    this the kinda sh1te we might see from a hyped teen
    my b1tch slap cup both dey cheeks like some tight jeans//



    -edit - damn censor
    Last edited by mc.majik; 09-13-2007 at 03:50 AM.
    Moderately dope!

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    I spit strong words swiftly spoken,
    You came in good health, yet you left me broken,
    My style has an approach that’s tongue in cheek,
    Coz it’s a joke when I leave your tongue between your teeth,
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    Your out-of-shapeness is jigglin like jell-o/
    Gelatinous beasts absorbin you nasty fellows/
    Take you to the gallows, the headsman says hello/
    "How would you like it today?", you say "Like hell bro"/
    Slap him across the face with the back of your fist/
    And snack on his wrist cause you was lackin the list/
    Of DNA strands needed for your own sustenence/
    You count dracu-wack and you hopped up on some substances.

    Oh well, I didn't really do many metaphors or similes, but I tried!

    -E.T.

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    damn most of that **** is weak

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    then u drop somethin brah. I know me and at least 4 other cats that have posted in this thread could probably murder you lyrically.

    Try any of us
    Bravery Pandemic
    Et Science
    Nattwalls
    Law1988
    Gutty502

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    slim...look at yourself in the mirror. then re-evuluate what you doing. you cant see me lyriclly but this is the internet who raps over the internet. and besides....my **** is real. what type of work have u possibly put in on the streets? this is y hiphop is dead.

    dog i just listen to your myspace. this **** is 2 funny. damn man everybody wanna be a ****ing gangster. if u lived 1 week in my neighborhood you be crying like **** lil slim.

    iliveit....urapit

    www.myspace.com/youngidc

    dont let the computer fool u champ
    Last edited by jyfresh; 09-13-2007 at 07:35 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    uhh, okay my myspace page is mainly for an artist i produce for. My style is way different. And dont claim how hard your streets are dude. I live in the metro in louisville, ky we have some ruff streets dude. And rappin on the internet still can show ur verbal skills, so keep it movin homie

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