Renegades 2007 (Preview)

Hmm well, at certain times it felt that you weren't putting feeling into certain lines. Also the lyrical content was a little basic but I think I still got the message across which was basically "F*ck you if you don't like my music" or am I incorrect? I'm not really feelin' the track to be honest. I think you need to flow a little better (which is not easy at times) and start writing more advanced. Just my honest feedback.
 
this was alrite but abit basic and a lack of emotion at times

My version of renegade is coming soon
 
Lyrics--really bad, sounds like you just started rappin yesterday.

Mix--I've heard worse.

Beat--C-

Delivery---Coulda been better.
 
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