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Slowly, emotions, played a role like a potion,
I just keep rolling in motion, please explain all the commotion,
Yeah I started from the bottom, Drizzy Drake did it, no problem,
There are enemies then frenemies, but you are just a wannabe,
They stand up tryna hurt me, but comedy was never for me,
I begged of you to stay one day, you promised me and said OK,
Then all of a sudden you disappear and slowly fade away.
 
Not really getting the whole played a role like a potion my man. I get what you are trying to say though. Would probably put the emotions line next to the begged lines instead though. It's like you went from emotions to the grind back to emotions ya know?
 
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