Iron Phantom (Prod by: R&W)

[Bigwon]

hiya folks! new track up, beat is homebrewed this time round.
Vocals,Lyrics,Beat by: R&W
www.myspace.com/rnmusic

Links:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=566397&songID=10004414

or

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/383694



Lyrics:

learns from life as he plays with death
tries to reap the awards
whether on peace pipe, or cancer stick
he's ready to unsheath for war
devils arise, as the angels fall
and he's hated by either or
living on both sides of this peril
on both sides of the barrel

Born on high noon, his eyes opened at midnight
sworn to take and give light, in the midst of a fight
forced to measure worth, whether truth whether lie
and whether rich or deprived, he'd sift through there lives
and to testify with god, was dance with the devil
no allegiance to set he kept his hands to his pistol
no one to hang with, no one to show him the ropes
as he only trusted himself, and the going was good
and whatever the just is he'd abide to justice
kept a clever remark for when he'd bite the dust as
the bounty on him dead, kept the counties alit
everyone from sheriffs to bar maidens wanted his head
only comfort in death, with ambushes in full beds
skimming clusters of bullets he lived life to the fullest
he felt the heat at it's coldest, but kept his muscle strong
From Dusk till dawn he'd keep his hustle on

learns from life as he plays with death
tries to reap the awards
whether on peace pipe, or cancer stick
he's ready to unsheath for war
devils arise, as the angels fall
and he's hated by either or
living on both sides of this peril
on both sides of the barrel

whether inspiring the rebels or the accord of the law
firing there metal was the only award that he saw
so for the lore that he'd start, he was a source of a star
and of course a kept art for when he was forced to draw
and as many settled to call the rebel a fool's soul
he gone ahead and cheated the devil with fool's gold
only followed christ's symbol as he'd crossed the lines
another way to put fire and water defined
Sometimes a bad aim but always a good shot
from town squares, to villages, to the saloons and pubs
as well as blood spread in chapels, to talley his rep
he made a red canal out of the valley of death
and in a stallions breath he treads into the winds
and If he was saint to us he'd be a sinner to them
The Quiet bark that bites hard as a D-O-G
So may a God bless his soul as he sleeps on his feet

learns from life as he plays with death
tries to reap the awards
whether on peace pipe, or cancer stick
he's ready to unsheath for war
devils arise, as the angels fall
and he's hated by either or
living on both sides of this peril
on both sides of the barrel

 

[Enigma(EndofDaze)]

I thought that ish was Ill as hell son!!

That beat was hot, I was diggin the hook too much. Just wasnt my style.

But overall homie thats skill! Big ups!!

 

[Bigwon]

thanks for the kind words my man!
and for that hook i have thoughts of just cutting the singing out of it and just keep it straight rap.

if you see this again, was it the singing that was bothering you in particular?

thanks!

 

[RoboWill]

Your flow is nice bro keep working on it. like the hook. but just the previous post, not my flow. the beat is hot though. this song is a plus

 

[W.A.I.S. Krew]

beat and flow is tight big1! i would take the singing off too tho i think the track calls for a straight rap vibe. good ish fam

 

[Bigwon]

thanks for the feed folks! Going to re upload with a polished hook, and an improved eq-ing job on the beat.

 

[LoveByLyrics]

The singing should have been in small doses instead of throughout but definitely has the 3 qualities of a good rap. Voice quality, control, poise.

 

[Bigwon]

thank you for the kindness loveby! I was actually thinking of getting rid of the singing all together...but then the reason i added it to begin with was to give the chorus an emotion. (felt just that chantey vibe was kinda monotone)

so that doing it in smaller doses might be an ideal thing to do if not more in this case...i'm afraid i'm just too married to the idea of having singing on it though. I'll have to put it down the pipe and see what comes out.