I Got Some New Songs, Can You Guys Go Check Em' Out And Give Me Some Feed-back...

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LAW_1988

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AND I KNOW THE SOUND ISN'T REALLY THAT CLEAR, SO DON'T LEAVE ME SOME COMMENTS TELLIN' ME THAT I NEED A BETTER MIC BECAUSE I KNOW THAT ALREADY BUT I'M BROKE..lol..BUT MESSAGES, COMMENTS, AND FRIEND REQUEST WOULD BE HELPFUL. THE ONLY WAY WE CAN GROW IS IF WE HELP EACH OTHER. SO HERE IS THE TRACK BREAK DOWN...

IT'S MY TIME: THE NAME SPEAKS FOR ITSELF, BUT IT'S A DOPE TRACK "HIP-HOP AT ITS FINEST FORREAL"

HOTNESS: IS JUST SUTTIN' TO MOVE TO, BUT THE LAST VERSE I WAS ABLE TO KICK SOME KNOWLEDGE SO GIVE IT A LISTEN FOR SURE

MAKE EM' FEEL EVERY LINE: I PUT THIS TOGETHER AFTER WATCHIN' BET AND SEING SOULJA BOY GET PLAY'D 8 x's IN AN HR. NOTHIN' PERSONAL, BUT HIP-HOP IS ABOUT BEIN' DIVERSE IN MY OPINION

PULLS ME BACK: I WAS REALLY FED UP AFTER "MAKE EM' FEEL EVERY LINE" I WAS ABOUT TO QUIT PERSUING RAP AS A CAREER. THEN IT'S LIKE GOD SPOKE TO ME, AND I RECORDED THIS

GO TO THIS LINK: www.myspace.com/jlawishere
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damn no punchline here, that is hot!!!
I like the flow, the message. I feel your in the group of rappers, that are able to do something with this music...I'd try to get a better mic asap, but even besides that i think your tracks are listenable, which is a really good thing...

don't know what your budgets limited to, but nowdays you can even get usb mics that have that quality (which should do you good)

i'd say though, just keep that going..just develop that style to the point were people are just cuming out there ear drumS!!! lol
 
THANKS FOR THE SUPPOORT, AND ANYONE WHO'S READING THIS DEF' GO CHECK OUT HIS MUSIC ASWELL. I'M TELLIN' YOU, HIS TRACK CALLED "BRAINSTORM" IS ILL. AND GO HOLLA AT MY MYSPACE PAGE WITH MESSAGES, COMMENTS, AND FRIEND REQUEST IF I DON'T HAVE YOU ALREADY. AND THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR TIME...

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www.myspace.com/jlawishere
 
LAW_1988 said:
AND I KNOW THE SOUND ISN'T REALLY THAT CLEAR, SO DON'T LEAVE ME SOME COMMENTS TELLIN' ME THAT I NEED A BETTER MIC BECAUSE I KNOW THAT ALREADY BUT I'M BROKE..lol..BUT MESSAGES, COMMENTS, AND FRIEND REQUEST WOULD BE HELPFUL. THE ONLY WAY WE CAN GROW IS IF WE HELP EACH OTHER. SO HERE IS THE TRACK BREAK DOWN...

IT'S MY TIME: THE NAME SPEAKS FOR ITSELF, BUT IT'S A DOPE TRACK "HIP-HOP AT ITS FINEST FORREAL"

HOTNESS: IS JUST SUTTIN' TO MOVE TO, BUT THE LAST VERSE I WAS ABLE TO KICK SOME KNOWLEDGE SO GIVE IT A LISTEN FOR SURE

MAKE EM' FEEL EVERY LINE: I PUT THIS TOGETHER AFTER WATCHIN' BET AND SEING SOULJA BOY GET PLAY'D 8 x's IN AN HR. NOTHIN' PERSONAL, BUT HIP-HOP IS ABOUT BEIN' DIVERSE IN MY OPINION

PULLS ME BACK: I WAS REALLY FED UP AFTER "MAKE EM' FEEL EVERY LINE" I WAS ABOUT TO QUIT PERSUING RAP AS A CAREER. THEN IT'S LIKE GOD SPOKE TO ME, AND I RECORDED THIS

GO TO THIS LINK: www.myspace.com/jlawishere
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- LAW IS BRINGING JUSTICE TO THE GAME -
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u need to put this under reviews that is where feedback will be returned.
 
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