Is this good chorus for a song?

[ProRapBeats]

Could be cool if you put some delay on it, but yeah I'd probly want to add a little more

 

[thatboyeric]

I think it's good it just needs some work and if the melody is good you have a winner my friend peace and all things dope.

 

[Yumid]

People actually answering this seriously..

 

[jdz7t8]

Props

 

[iggiafrica]

dope. platinum. frame it.