Feedback on my SONG ??

[BEATZKMT]

Please give me some feedback on my verse, Im on the second verse and my homeboy LILSEIN on the first. Me and My friend made the beat. FEEDBACK PLEASE !!!!!

 

[BEATZKMT]

heres the song.. sorryy.

leave feed back!!!

 

[manchester8]

yea man good

 

[BEATZKMT]

Thanks Bro..

 

[EngeniusBeatz]

track was nice! lyrics and delivery could be better but A for effort keep at it!

 

[BEATZKMT]

Thanks.

 

[FuriousFred]

I like the synth-melody and you have a good voice. The keys have also very nice, smooth sound. But I think you could use more harmonies than C#m and G#m and maybe write a bridge part.