Choice - Your Weapon Of Choice

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Bradley

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Newish lyrics... check em out and let me know what you think, the track's called 'choice' btw:

You're choice is to choose what appeals to you/
If I appeal to you then listen to what I would choose - listen/
choose love over hate despise is waste -choose-/
your body over plastic what eyes see don't make you/
beautiful inside you make sure we don't mistake you/
take 2 slices of cake you deserve it don't waste food/
of course I refer to your life and what you're given/
don't take for granted the love and the pleasures that you're living/

choose to go first don't just copy or wait/
believe in YOUR beliefs no religion don't copy your faith/
rotten and fake most haters knock and deflate/
your pace in this race against time in this place/
blame's a terrible thing in the hands of ignorance/
bliss in cases but in this case a criminal offence/
Why do they blame my girl for something I caused?/
of course I blame myself twas MY breaking the law/

MY choice MY plan MY hand on the wheel/
Why don't people seem to think just how she might feel?/
Who did it? TOM did. Tom's achilles heel/
is his weakness of sense choices determine our real/
I feel - it's time our future's determined by US/
OUR feelings and choices circulated by US/
first let love take a side line sometimes/
don't be shocked all are selfish rely on YOUR mind/

you're fine - no matter what problems others have it worse/
it's your choice to act or ignore problems of the world/
I do it - I ignore 90 percent of this ****/
but I measure persepective against my life and its twists/
and it figures thatthe selfish are also the richest/
tight-fisted twisted figures of power ****ing fascists/
your choice - is it race or racism that matters?/
who really should be laughing? whose heart is truely 'blackist'?/

second verse:

It takes great craftsmanship to 'make' minds/
bully, propaganda to shift and taint minds/
take the time to take the floor and draw the line/
you're not repressed like some make your tongue spit fire/
lift the thoughts of the many bring opinion and choice/
bring development and change bring the wisdom of your voice/
boys - unite bring fight to the norm/
contrast is dimmed through class soon their power will fall/

all join hands stand together for choice/
if we all scream together they can't ignore our noise/
can't switch channel, turn page or hum/
this time we're gonna battle til the war is won/
all as one - rise and fall as one/
ignite spur fight then we rule as one - we're gonna/
shed light til it's too bright for some/
show them things they wouldn't believe like their world's redone - we're gonna-/

give them their choice but it's their choice to use it/
most given the choice are either confused or abuse it/
imagine how they'd been if their choice was useless/
like the colour of their skin determined that they'd lose it/
music - was their main way to escape/
I respect that no-one should be knocked down for their faith/
or wait - let's think about this one for a minute/
should people lose their choice - just because they're women?!/

F*CK-THAT you'd think-that man'd be above-that/
it's just that some are ignorant to the love that/
we share let's share our choice with the masses/
no one should lose it equality through the classes/
to a few knives and guns are weapons of choice/
mine's my voice and the rhymes I drop and rejoice/
I deploy poised arms and destroy twisted visions/
I employ no harm just voice points and decisions/


third verse

If you had the choice tell me what would you change?/
would the radio stations play you more of a range?/
or would it play you the best sh*t yeah the creme de la creme?/
play your friends and their friends their new **** that they'd sent?/
choose a harsh life or abortion, strife or divorce 'em/
prison or hard work, no for an answer or force 'em/
the choice is yours always - never say there're forces/
telling you to act the way you act like they were awesome/

more-to the point you always make decisions/
whether it's the strong or the weakest or just for your religion/
just take the time to step back test out your vision/
in your mind you might find that there's and attribute you're missing/
this is your chance to alter that decision/
mould it into something individual and different/
soon you'll find that intellect and pleasure you'll hoist/
whether for you or for others the only weapon is choice.
 
some sick rhymes you got there man... agree with everything. Love the way you write and how you express it. When thats on a beat, send it my way.

I wanna battle you....but in audio..

What d'ya say???
 
i wonder if "Voice Points" might be an alternative title?

although "choice" is probably the most apropriate. yeah it is.

the only issue i have is with the first line...

"If I appeal to you then listen to what I would choose "

i really love all the lyrics, well a lot of them anyway. but if beauty is on the inside, and also i havent seen or experienced you (and neither may have a radio listener?), then this early line is gonna be a bit potentially offputting. because ppl dont know yet if you appeal to them until they hear what you choose.



"choose love over hate despise is waste -choose-/"

yeah!

"choose a harsh life or abortion, strife or divorce 'em/
prison or hard work, no for an answer or force 'em/
the choice is yours always - never say there're forces/
telling you to act the way you act like they were awesome/
"

hard tough and compassionate and encouraging.

"more-to the point you always make decisions/
whether it's the strong or the weakest or just for your religion/
just take the time to step back test out your vision/
in your mind you might find that there's and attribute you're missing/
"

interesting and well put together in many places.

:)
 
nice. thanks guys. this track is going to be on my second album btw so potentially some people might 'know' me (hopefully! lol) but I see what you're saying mate.. I'll have a play with it.

Another uplifting review from Dobos! hehe cheers man. Yeah I'm up for the audio battle dude that sounds awesome. It'll have to be after the Easter tho cus I have absolutely no equipment with me at all! I promise not to write anything til we arrange a date btw ;)

cheers

Bradley
 
Just been thinking... Dobos, by audio battle do you mean like 32 bars or something just slapped over a beat? or a full diss track?... I'm up for the latter if you are! lol sounds fun

Bradley
 
btw Dobos can you have a go at writing another verse for this track? if you like post it up here and we'll see how this one goes...?
 
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