The 808 should be deeper, it doesn't really fit the mix. The melody sounds were really nice and simple, but I enjoyed them a lot. The plucks really made it a head nodder, and you did a great job of changing up the beat so it doesnt get repetitive except for the kicks and 808s, they were the same for too long. Check out a last day of school/summer song I made https://soundcloud.com/cole_mercutio/desert-arithmetic-prod-thejasom