[Piano] Walking closer with you

catsmice

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Hello everyone, this is my music and wish you enjoy listening. It would be great to have your opinions about this. Thanks!

 
The song fit the background theme so nicely. Some tips I might add to improve would be to adjust the velocity of the notes of the piano, as it sounds a little too synthetically played. For example, I first might increase velocity more on the first beat, then adjust the next few beats, and then either decrease the last note on the measure, or increase it; depends on where we are in the song.
Also, while I do appreciate the different chord changes throughout the song (0:48, 1:20, 2:08, 2:40, 2:58), it can sound a little too abrupt for the listener. I would work on smoothing out these transitions.

You have potential, certainly, so keep working and producing music!
 
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