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    As the Fire Burns

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    Made a new track/started a new project today;


    "As the Fire Burns"




    What do y'all think?

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    pretty nice. gave it a like. good luck with the project

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    -kick drum shouldn't be so far left and epsecfially the snare

    -Bass lacks presence for me personally

    -the intro seems to just start a little oddly like the synth fades in really fast and it sounds unnatural, I'd suggest either fading it in slower or no fade at all
    I like your overall concept a lot man, I think that warm paddy synth could have a bit taken out of the bottom end too!

    -The crashes are insanely low and sound like whispers, also where are the hats driving the rhythm? This song really needs that

    -When it breaks into that triple kick bit it just feels a bit empty, a bit dead

    -Around the 38 second mark that change sounds pretty cool, that section is starting to show what this piece can be but it feels to me like a prechorus, it's just begging for a chorus after it. Definitely work on a bridge for this piece too!

    -overall though you've got potential here, a great mood, I'd suggest keep working on it, fill it out, listen to bands you love and see what's missing. I like your overall concept a lot man, I think that warm paddy synth could have a bit taken out of the bottom end too!

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    ^ Great comments. The only thing I'd add -- you might want to vary the velocity on the triple kick some so it doesn't sound so robotic. Cheers.

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