Review/Criticize Please myFirstBeat

[ske[t]ch]

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This is my first beat. Nothing that i claim to be amazing. It's simple & created on FruityLoops. I guess you can classify it as hip-hop. I'm looking for all types of (constuctive) criticism that will hopefully help me improve. Especially something concrete that i can apply. Thx in advance for ur help ..
(remember im a beginner and im only 14.. got a lot ahead of me.. so no high expectations please. but thanks for taking the time ye know..)

sorry i can't deep link the song.. its called "pain beat"..
please if you can dont use lofi..

Daani @ MP3.com

thx again

 

[RockSpin]

u need work.......but since ur 14 u got time

 

[taar44]

The beat is correctly titled "Pain Beat" ...................because it was a pain to my eardrums listening to it. Dude, it was wack. The intro was not that bad though it was still simplistic in nature. The kick sounded really weak. You are only 14 so you have lots of time to practice and get your style down. Nothing personal.

 

[ske[t]ch]

hehehe.. no but really no offense taken (izz my first beat) thx for the feedback.. this was composed with a mouse lol.. (u cant really call it composed).. but i would like to know where you all suggest i start u know..