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    "Up an Up" a nobody type beat F4F

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    any an all feedback returned within a couple hours.

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    nice little chill track...i think mixing of instrument level could use some work..but ur drums are dope, esp hats..really enjoy the sounds u used, id work on the hornish synth that comes in on what i think is the hook...good stuff tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by yjvasco View Post
    nice little chill track...i think mixing of instrument level could use some work..but ur drums are dope, esp hats..really enjoy the sounds u used, id work on the hornish synth that comes in on what i think is the hook...good stuff tho

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    preciate it man. when you say work on the hornish synth do you mean the mix on it or the pattern? and thats cool you thought that was the chorus i didnt even really plan out a chorus i just kinda left it open to interpret for the artist

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    A "nobody type beat" haha, a YOU type beat my brotha very unique in your use of the electric guitar & progressionally styled mix. Definitely a success an if this is unmixed..jezuz
    No real complaints here. Being a producer myself I'm not trying to buy this instrumental but if you'd like to do something for promotional purposes I'm down.
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    Quote Originally Posted by aweil View Post
    preciate it man. when you say work on the hornish synth do you mean the mix on it or the pattern? and thats cool you thought that was the chorus i didnt even really plan out a chorus i just kinda left it open to interpret for the artist
    The mix on it, I like the pattern...haha, and as writer I just took it as the hook...thanks

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    - Cool sample
    - I felt the intro was a little too long but thats OK
    - Turn up the main snare in the mix (the part before the "chorus") -- or turn down the sample -- i think its overpowering the drums
    - I would add small little instrumental elements that come in and out throughout the verses so that its less repetitive

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    The intro went on a bit too long, but damn after that diggin it bro!!

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    Such a dope track, very chilled out. The drums are nice and are mixed perfectly imo. The synths that come in during the chorus could be a bit bigger and more epic though, but this is not a problem I dont think, I would love to hear a rapper get on this! Good work!

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    yeah intro was a littleeee too long but dope nonetheless, i gave you a follow

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    i appreciate yall! all feedback returned so far. just a thought but is the intro too long even if an artist was on the track?

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