track me n ma homie made [F4F]

[hoyt]

One 4 All [w/ Mo] 英雄ではない by hoyt <3 | Free Listening on SoundCloudYo I am looking for critiques on both our parts, i also self produced the beat. Please fucking destroy me with feedback. I'll do the same <3

 

[lil stroie]

the beat its vibey, but at some of the parts of the track, you were off the beat. Not minding that, the outcome is neat. when you got some time check this.

 

[AugustusTheGreat]

The beat has a nice happy feel. The vocals are pretty nicely mixed as well, maybe slightly too loud in the hook. Well produced for sure. The rapping could be a bit stronger maybe with a more interesting flow. Not bad overall though.


My beat
F4F - Smokers Lounge - RETURNING FEEDBACK

 

[hoyt]

the beat its vibey, but at some of the parts of the track, you were off the beat. Not minding that, the outcome is neat. when you got some time check this.

Yeah this a rough mix, when i do my harmonic mixing i tend to get a little off, my fault but just gettin some feedback 'fore i finish the rest of the song. thanks for the feedback <3

 

[hoyt]

The beat has a nice happy feel. The vocals are pretty nicely mixed as well, maybe slightly too loud in the hook. Well produced for sure. The rapping could be a bit stronger maybe with a more interesting flow. Not bad overall though.


My beat
F4F - Smokers Lounge - RETURNING FEEDBACK

Thanks Augustus! Yeah i definitely need to mix the rest of this one and run my levels again. As I make each next song my voice and flow get a little better so that can just be fixed with some time and work. Thanks for the feedback! <3