Track I made. (old)

[Young Wynn]

Hey guys i'm new to this forum. Hoping to get feedback for music i'm making and i welcome it from you guys.

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I will also definitely give back feedback for your material.

 

[paega]

Nice vibe, not much to complain about, the song follows some kind of a red line and I like how it builds up.
You could benefit from some panning and and bring forth that trumpet a bit, imagine the trumpet as a singer, if you catch my drift.
Also after a few repeats I can't shake the feeling that there is a pretty heavy quantize on a lot of the things going on in there, you know the thing that makes it more alive than robotic static.

Keep pushing and check my beat out - F4F - StonerRock Boombap Cypress kind of beat

 

[Juneau]

I think the buildup is good and just like paega said the trumpet feels like the vocal in your track. I like that idea. Good luck to you Young Wynn.

 

[Somasu]

I really like the trumpet. I'm not a fan of the drums - it just doesn't match the vibe of the beat to me. Maybe what this beat lacks is better sound selection. It definitely has a lot of potential though.

Feedback on this please Next of Kin [F4F]

 

[Donta Black]

Nice move track overall. I would have preferred to hear a different pattern of percussion as well. But still great idea! Check me out:The Art of Storytelling Rap Contest $100 cash prize

 

[Young Wynn]

I love this man. Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad i joined this forum.

 

[Young Wynn]

thank you. I will definitely keep that in mind going forward. Good luck to you to Juneau.

 

[Young Wynn]

I appreciate the honest feedback my man.

 

[Young Wynn]

thanks man. I appreciate this as well.