Songwriter/Singer looking to work with rappers! Need some feedback!

[TheStudentAlejandro]

These are all recorded really cheapstyle. I have access to a studio, these are just demos. Please let me know what you think, what should be improved, what you like/dislike, thank you.


https://soundcloud.com/livefromthevault1/whatsonurmind-interlude


https://soundcloud.com/livefromthevault1/conversation

https://soundcloud.com/livefromthevault1/untiwemeet-demo